my 10min story in eng.

one day I was walk and then I started to  salivate so I run home for food but went I got home my mum said do this but I defy what she said.  My sister were intimidating me so I said stop it but they did not. I was going to go to  the pool but it was condensation. I went to my friend house to play netball and I won you got say it was immense.